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Haha this is the greatest first comment I've ever seen! If it was intential of course :) But I don't get the point of saying it makes a whistline sounds as it spins around...is it just me or was that completely irrelevant lol?


The bit about the whistling sound is relevant in that it provides sensory detail so that you can imagine how it went down. You know that thing was moving fast when it hit him.


I think that 'happy sack' is a little ambiguous; it makes me think of a bag of weed. Why not... 'my balls'?

Ouch. but that's just the way it goes sometimes. Kids are evil! You're just beginning to learn one of life's harsh lessons. Good for you.

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