By seablue - 11/06/2009 06:12 - United States

Today, I wrote a poem for this guy I am falling for. Before telling him that I wrote it, he read it and then laughed at how "corny and stupid" it was because he would "never date someone who could come up with something that lame." The poem was about how vulnerable he makes me feel. FML
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It's cool that you had the guts to gave him a poem you wrote yourself, but you really shouldn't write about how vulnerable someone makes you feel. And they're a little overdone, making them even more corny. Not everyone appreciates poetry though.

ZiggyMorrison 0

most guys dont like poems specially love poems you should have just told him how you felt its not that hard

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It's cool that you had the guts to gave him a poem you wrote yourself, but you really shouldn't write about how vulnerable someone makes you feel. And they're a little overdone, making them even more corny. Not everyone appreciates poetry though.

change vulnerable to horny and he'll like it

^ you need to be the representative of all guys everywhere

what a winner you got there

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She's not... Maybe you are? Do you also think they should stay inside their parents until they get married and not go to school?

Why shouldn't girls write poems for guys? No matter what century it is, it's always nice to receive a poem from someone. :)

well, maybe it wasn't a very good poem (no offence)

mayhembaby 0

what a dick. but yeah i kind of agree with #3. it's a little creepy.

xinfin1a 0

Wow, well sorry about that...Hopefully things will get better. Just forget about him. He's nothing but a loser.

let him keep thinking you didn't write it though....

jem1991 0

YDI for not being a better poet.

jem1991 0

YDI for not being a better poet.

I agree with #3. Write poetry for yourself and then publish a book or perform it in a beatnik bar. But don't write it for a guy, big turnoff.