By mmaisie - 01/02/2011 10:35 - United Kingdom
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You can edit it?! What kind of statement/question is that?! They did a WHOLE 2000 word essay on LAS VEGAS, instead of NEW YORK. You can't just go through and change Las Vegas to New York..the information included would be about Las Vegas, and they would have to erase the whole thing!!
If the phrase is relevant to the contents of your essay, I don't see the problem. If it is irrelevant, why did you put it in the title in the first place?
You could argue that Las Vegas is also a "city that never sleeps", since people stay up all night gambling or out at clubs. However, Las Vegas is usually recognized as "Sin City" and the slogan is "what happens in Vegas, stays in Vegas".