By anon - 28/04/2016 02:36 - United States - Tualatin
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By anon - 28/04/2016 02:36 - United States - Tualatin
Break up the last sentence: "...the bird away. Instead it attacked me."
Why? It's fine the way it is. Stop being so picky, it's the Internet!
There's no harm in giving people some writing pointers, as long as they aren't doing it rudely. What's wrong with constructive criticism?
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Break up the last sentence: "...the bird away. Instead it attacked me."
There's no harm in giving people some writing pointers, as long as they aren't doing it rudely. What's wrong with constructive criticism?