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By anon - 28/04/2016 02:36 - United States - Tualatin

Today, I was playing in a golf tournament and was actually doing very well. Then, I saw this baby squirrel getting attacked by a crow. Being the hero I thought I was, I went over with my golf club to try to scare the bird away but instead it attacked me. FML
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Break up the last sentence: "...the bird away. Instead it attacked me."

There's no harm in giving people some writing pointers, as long as they aren't doing it rudely. What's wrong with constructive criticism?

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Break up the last sentence: "...the bird away. Instead it attacked me."

Why? It's fine the way it is. Stop being so picky, it's the Internet!

There's no harm in giving people some writing pointers, as long as they aren't doing it rudely. What's wrong with constructive criticism?